Should i say good bye?
or... is it better to continue flying
in a velvet sky?
to continue swimming
in a vast ocean on ilussions?
do you wanna give to this story a conclussion?
How could i smile, if you have taken away
everything that was inside my heart?
if you have left me alone...
just with those memories in mind
just with those pieces of my love.
Texto agregado el 30-12-2004, y leído por 150
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30-12-2004
Para mi gusto le falta un "elemento innovador". Ten cuidado con la ortografía! I really think you should stick to spanish though, se te da mejor! Saludos! Sita
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