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Sometimes I feel like the fog.
There, but absent and transparent.
Sometimes I feel like the wind.
There , but just for a second before I slip away.
Sometimes I fell like a stick of wood.
There, but going to break so soon.
Sometimes I feel like bambu.
there, looking so firm outside but empty inside. |
Texto agregado el 26-08-2006, y leído por 150
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17-09-2006 |
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Well, your writing is nice with elements there..wind, fog I like this words "I feel like bambu.
there, looking so firm outside but empty inside"...that is as some people are...I find them everyday, not all of them, but most of them...all my stars for You. gfdsa |
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04-09-2006 |
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Some time I read something beatiful like this, but in english doctora |
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26-08-2006 |
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You look alike when you are quite*5 terref |
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26-08-2006 |
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Sometimes I feel like the fog.
There, but absent and transparent.
Sometimes I feel like the wind.
There , but just for a second before I slip away.
Sometimes I fell like a stcik of wood.
There, but going to break so soon.
Sometimes I feel like bambu.
thre, looking so firm outside but empty inside*5 terref |
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26-08-2006 |
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if iu ar a bambu a panda can it iu, bi kerful nenedelpitulin |
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