Where has gone the sun?
This day the night has taken all the sky
How can be missed the sun
The light has been taked away.
This misery this agony
She cant take it anymore...
She is running...
She is bleeding..
She is cutting herself
trying to not feel the pain anymore
This gloomy day
is her final day
How help her
She is screaming
and the sun doesnt
gonna light once more
Where has gone?
Theres only darkness
She is so lost...
She is so afraid...
She is runnning, she is bleeding... she is dying..
Theres only darkness...
She is so lost... she is so afraid...
Texto agregado el 27-01-2006, y leído por 96
visitantes. (1 voto)
Lectores Opinan
27-01-2006
hey! first of all, thank you for your interest in participating in a website where everyone tends to write in spanish. i was actually waiting for someone to do it. i'd recently discovered this website and i am beyond addicted to this thing. i'll probably drop something in english as well. loved your poem. i like how you take the sun and convert it into a female. i am tired of the sun being "he" thank you y sigue aportando. atreyu
Para escribir comentarios debes ingresar a la Comunidad: Login
(1 voto)